I played a bit more with the image from “All Alone and Still Gathering Attention” and came up with a different crop. This one is much simpler and much clearer, and seems to convey its message in a stronger way. I’m still undecided which one I like better.
you’re right, this one does convey the message better than “All Alone and Still Gathering Attention.”
[society, society,society…hard to bear, but harder to live without]